Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people support the opinion that teenagers should work for a part-time job because it would form them into a responsible individual. While others argue that they would not be able to cope up with their studies. In my opinion, one should do a part-time job as long as they are able to manage both studies and job.
On one hand, having a part-time job seems to be beneficial. First and foremost, the job would shape them into a more punctual person. For instance, they have to reach on time and complete the assigned work, so there is no time left for procrastination. Secondly, they will learn about teamwork and can learn a sufficient number of additional skills such as work-life balance and gain work experience at such an early age. Lastly, they will learn the value of money and more importantly, how to save and manage their budgets.
On the other hand, nothing comes without its own disadvantages. Firstly, one can easily become money-minded, as they are in their adolescence and would not be able to differentiate between what is good and bad for them. Secondly, they should be able to balance both education and their jobs, because if they have low grades, they would not get a full-time opportunity which can affect their career. Lastly, they might miss out on extracurricular activities such as sports, dance, and singing.
To conclude, considering the above points, youngsters should focus more on studies and after school activities, because they can experience professional life later on in their lives but their youth would never come back.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...orm them into a responsible individual. While others argue that they would not be abl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74623040746 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.695161205 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307673397376 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104809877677 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576575839372 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18307050859 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058486042042 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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