While choosing a job the salary is the main consideration for many . others , however prefer different other aspects of a job over the salary they earn. In your opinion what are the most important aspects of a job?
Adopting a particular profession requires before and concerned about several attributes. Many people consider regions as the prime factor to be taken in account. whereas, it is asserted by others that in comparison with salary , there are other factors which overpower a person's earning while selecting occupation. in my opinion both the given views have their own significance while pursuing a job.
To begin with , for fulfillment of daily prerequisites it becomes essential for a person to select jobs according to salary factor. There are several hierarchical needs a person has and a dream of accomplishing them ;however, salary in such case plays an significant role. while performing in a particular field a person's earning becomes a motivating consent and in eager to earn more individuals perform more productively. Income matters predominantly in one's life and works as a reward for working hard with full enthusiasm . to cite an example , many industrial employers set targets for workers and award extra wages for breaking that potential target ,thus in such a way it motivates a person to perform well.
However, there are numerous other reasons which people take in concern before joining an occupation firstly they look after jobs which require good working environment and supporting authorities. These two aspects are vital for an individual to look after before choosing certain jobs. Secondly evaluating background of such companies is also pivotal to acknowledge. As getting appointed to companies which are trapped in debts can cause detrimental effects on a person's professional life. Finally reputation of an firm in the market also matters a lot and one must think about such things with sound mind.
To terminate all elements are required to be evaluated before opting any profession and the solitary view on salary must not be observed , wide approach should be opted while taking such an crucial decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28990228013 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88853722004 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2626706839 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207071579316 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635009315548 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614618820196 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119283597932 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575419453208 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.