It is irrefutable that reservation for women in jobs has always been a controversial topic since few years. But Many people propose that government should reserve specific amount of job vacancies for women. I totally support this view but there are some negative impacts as well. In further paragraphs, the essay shall provide my opinions with supporting ideas.
First of all, it is generally accepted in the past days that women are not meant for jobs and considered that they are born to handle household chores. However, there are some women who pursued a managerial positions in a large organizations with a great dedication and commitment. Also, they have proven their eligibility of handling stress and responsibilities of work life with the satisfactory management of personal life. Hence, the reservation for women in employment will stimulate other women to triumph on the stereotype built for them and will help to present their talent in front of the world.
Furthermore, there are many studies which have proven that women are more effective than men in some cases like domestic violence and juvenile rehabilitation centers as they are dealing with love and care. Therefore, the authorities should promote the reservation for women to empower them and should provide them stage to show their eligibility of performing tasks in stressful situations as well.
However, reserving more places for women will be injustice to skilled male competitors and raise the sense of discrimination and gender based racism. As a result, male colleagues will not respect them and can increase the stress in workplaces.
To conclude, based on cited evidences, I opine that the government should certainly allocate a small percentage of women reserved positions which will encourage them and will not surge the feeling of injustice and racism in other competitors.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'position'?
Suggestion: position
...are some women who pursued a managerial positions in a large organizations with a great d...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'organization'?
Suggestion: organization
...rsued a managerial positions in a large organizations with a great dedication and commitment....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as a result, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89928904239 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8066082448 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271198431337 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940971134224 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082231420572 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148863324207 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055084413852 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'position'?
Suggestion: position
...are some women who pursued a managerial positions in a large organizations with a great d...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'organization'?
Suggestion: organization
...rsued a managerial positions in a large organizations with a great dedication and commitment....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as a result, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89928904239 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8066082448 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271198431337 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940971134224 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082231420572 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148863324207 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055084413852 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.