It is difficult for people living in cities today to get enough physical exercise. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve the problem?
It is true to say that these days individuals living in urban areas are facing multiple problems in keeping themselves healthy and fit. This essay will discuss the possible reasons behind this situation and will introduce some solutions that can be used to alternate this issue.
To begin with, the predominant reason for this worrying situation is the overcrowdedness in the cities. In other words, nowadays the majority of workers from rural areas are moving to the cities in search of jobs, therefore, they also need accommodation for their living. So, in order to provide proper housing, the government is utilising every piece of empty land. Eventually, leaving for doing exercise. Apart from this, most of the people working in cities are busy throughout their day, and would not be able to give adequate time to themselves.
Nevertheless, there are some solutions that could be used to curb this rising concern. Firstly, the authorities should consider the needs of the masses while constructing new homes for them. For example, building parks and sports clubs for recreational activities would be one of the best ways to encourage citizens to do yoga, meditation and other things that will make them physically fit. Secondly, working people should try to give a sufficient amount of time to them, either in morning or evening. In order to maintain their physical as well as mental state.
In conclusion, although due to the increasing population and busier lifestyle of cities make it quite hard to do physical work, still by making the proper plans and building more parks, this problem will be easily eliminated. So, both the authorities and the individuals have to put their sincere efforts to improve this scenario.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13732394366 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69418203578 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0847351474 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22260282281 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679980612711 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374275637892 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132241207668 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00975440567874 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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