People these days are less fit than they used to be. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, the overweighting phenomenon is prevailing than before since the food is not healthy or organic, along with that, there is no enough exercising. Eating good food and playing sports regularly are the most important solutions to this issue.
One of the major reasons that people are unfit now than before is, consuming too much amount of fatty food. In other words, eating processed, canned, or junk foodstuffs that are not fresh and contain too much fat and sugar cause weight gain. Another significant reason is that recently people do not exercise as much as before.
Owing to working and busy daily life, most of the people could not find time for playing sports which hugely affects their fitness. For example, a study that has been held at Oxford University shows that seventy percent of people who do not exercise regularly are overweighted. Therefore these are the main reasons that most of the people are unfit and currently.
Firstly, what people eat is one of the main solutions. Hence people should watch the nutrients and calories in their food, so it is preferred to be on a healthy diet and get the organic and fresh version of everything because it will provide their bodies all the needed vitamins and minerals. Secondly, since many people do not have time for regular exercise, they may use their daily life to do it. By way of explanation, using the stairs instead of the elevator every day is a great method. For instance, a statistic made in China shows that persons who do not have time for exercising but going to work by bicycle are very fit.
To conclude, more and more people get overweighted because of an unhealthy lifestyle of eating detrimental food and the nonexistence of the sport in their daily routine. this +
7 be tackled by replacing bad food with a fresh one and exercising frequently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85079365079 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54787519355 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4180709946 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209830907609 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701009245639 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361574130421 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913940818322 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427540849936 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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