In the past, people wore clothes that were unique to their own culture. Today, people all over the world wear the same types of clothes. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
Clothing trend has changed over the years and people have adopted to same trend of fashion all around the world. Although some might think it is a negative development, but I believe it to be extremely beneficial. Not only because of it bring sense of equality and decrease discrimination but also because of easy availability around the globe. This essay will explore the factors which make this development a positive one.
There are multiple benefits of this development. Firstly, once of the major advantage of this development is that it create equality. As wearing similar kind of dresses make people look alike. Take an example of a studies conducted by fashion magazine in China, which reveals that people has adopted global outfits and traditional dresses are not common anymore. Thus, this benefit can almost single-handedly make this development positive.
Secondly, another major benefit linked with this development is that cultural discrimination has decreased. As similar interest in clothes bring people together. For Instance, Canada has people who migrated from all over the world and have different traditions, but opting to similar fashion trends help to reduce discriminatory attitude. Hence, resemblance in worn clothes can create harmony among people.
Finally, when people wish to buy similar clothes they can get it anywhere in the world. As lots of brands have outlet in many countries and people can purchase their favorite outfits across the world.
To sum up, I believe that this development is an overall positive development. Not only because it creates equality and decrease cultural differences but also because people can easily shop their choice of clothing around the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7855225367 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.854940758 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5882352941 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369574015721 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113091178985 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735512142369 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208847263599 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406756527084 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.