The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over:
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience
It is projected that the rate of birth in most developed countries will be declined over the next 50 years. Meanwhile, over 33% of the population in these countries will be over age 65 by 2030. In my opinion, both factors are detrimental to developed countries. However, it can still be tackled in several ways.
With regards to society, the impact of the growing number of senior citizens will burden the community. This is because senior citizens are unemployed and they are very dependent on the government's welfare. For example, the financial department of Norway estimates that the annual budget required for the welfare of senior citizens will double up in the next 10 years, lesser funds can be allocated for development and hence slow down the development of the country. On the other hand, lower birth rate will deteriorate the reactivity of the community in near future as youngsters are energized and hard working in comparison with senior citizens. Reduced amount of fresh workers will lead to shortage of manpower in every sector.
There are two effective ways to resolve these issues. Firstly, the government ought to encourage the development of automation in order to replace repetitive tasks such as assemblies. By doing so, large amount of workforce can be released to do something more productive instead. Another method is to adjust up the retirement age so more retired ones can return to their workplace once again. This solution not only relieves the shortage of manpower but also senior citizens no longer rely on welfare as income source which reduce the financial stress of developed countries.
To conclude, the adverse impact of this particular scenario is devastating upon developed countries. If these solutions are implemented by the government, this hardship can be avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, still, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18367346939 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77289959925 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4434218945 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322291612774 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102276612636 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146090205475 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199889250577 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18835465828 0.056905535591 331% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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