The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Cars are playing an essential part in a person's life, and it has come to a point wherein we cannot live without it. In 1888, British introduced them in roads. As years pass by, new varieties of transportation such as bus, train ,airplane and trucks have also appeared on roads of London. In my opinion, having a car makes human's lives easier for travel while, other types of transport facilities also helps nation's in different ways which would be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, transportation is a basic need for everyone around the world. It helps them to travel to work, transport goods and even to relax. While they are different types, cars posses the most advantage as people could choose the time they want to start from their starting point to reach their destination. For example, a student wanting to attend an interview could travel by car so that he would reach the company in time.
On the other hand, as car ownership keeps on increasing, traffic in roads are also seen to rise. This causes accidents and dispute among the public and hence, amendment of global laws could solve this problem. Government could pass laws such that buying two or more cars by a single family would be fined that could initiate fear to individuals spending more for them. However, an even better solution would be usage of public transport such as the metro. This would not only reduce traffic but also reduces air pollution that is caused my increasing usage of cars.
In conclusion, vehicles play a major role in managing events that occur in different places. Although Cars are one of best options for travelling with safety, it pose bad effects towards the society. Hence, with the help of public transport facilities and the creation of new national laws, people will be aware of the issues and control the usage of cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ies of transportation such as bus, train ,airplane and trucks have also appeared o...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'poses'?
Suggestion: poses
... options for travelling with safety, it pose bad effects towards the society. Hence,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.796875 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44851477622 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8462011495 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198706714677 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645793032395 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469276554147 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116190987822 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474241486295 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.