Society is based on rules and laws. It would not function if individuals are free to do whatever they want to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Without a shadow of a doubt, with the afoot progression in communities, human beings are facing miscellaneous problems. To tackle this sort of issue, they irrefutably are to impose some rules such as a constitution. And provided they do not attend the provided laws, their societies dysfunctionally work. To some point, I concur with this credence, while I can not help looking on the other side. Here, I discuss both facets of the topic succinctly.
On the one hand, they who are the proponents of such an idea aver that the promulgated laws are an integral part of our communities and we have to abide by the rules. If we do not pay attention to them, both government and people will encounter chaos and capricious without any dubious. For instance, Ms. Alleon, who is one of the trailblazers in the program of Rule in Society, puts forward that when I commenced the program, my city was overwhelmed and deluged in chaos, but now all things are happening on due time. Moreover, some tend to do the jeopardized activities, and should do we not apply any circumscription, they will endanger the health of others. To this end, imposing laws are requisite in societies.
Meanwhile, they who are the advocates of this notion maintain that sometimes some programs cause the movement of societies faces with a hindrance. To further address this issue, they demonstrate that some bureaucratic processes lead to the lengthening time of launching a program, giving rise to the matter that people circumvent rules without factoring in it. For example, in my country, to attain a permit for taking up a company, we have to wait for more than two years, indicating our program is in a two-year moratorium.
To briefly recapitulate this essay, we can boil down it to: (1) it is a desideratum of our communities to stick to the rule, otherwise we face diverse problems. (2) Some inflicted laws just make people restive and are deemed some precluding activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 371, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to look' or 'look'.
Suggestion: to look; look
...ith this credence, while I can not help looking on the other side. Here, I discuss both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89156626506 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95980598086 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9795601742 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136251843056 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482711789475 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046538861938 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814090834121 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373684558678 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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