Some people think that it is better to educate the boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views.
According to the statement, some masses think that it is better to give education to both girls and boys in separate single gender school. However, other individuals believe that, it is more beneficial when boys and girls are attending mixed schools. In my opinion, co-education is the better and both the views are explained in the coming paragraphs.
To begin with, most of the people think that boys and girls should be educated in separate schools due to various reasons. Firstly, the pivotal reason behind is that, elder people are of traditional times and narrow minded. They think according to their tradition. Due to this, mostly families do not refuse the orders of their elders and they prefer to educate their children in separate schools. Because, they believe that, girls do not have right to talk with boys and they always have to stay far away from the boys. Apart from that, people prefer to educate their children in single gender school, because according to them, girls are more safe and feel comfortable when they study in a separate school where only girls study. Therefore, the major reason behind this thinking is discrimination and inequality between the gender.
On the other hand, some people believe that both the boys and girls become more benefitted when they study together by attending mixed schools. Because, in today's modern era, there is no discrimination between boys and girls, both are equal. If they study together, then they become more comfortable and confident with their opposite gender. In addition, in future when they will go out of town for higher studies in any university or college, there, they will not face any difficulty to talk with their opposite gender. They will become more confident and will not feel shy while talking with others. It is easy for them to face all the situation and people become more open minded so they do not restricted their children to communicate with opposite gender. So, they prefer their children to go in mixed gender school for education.
To conclude, according to my point of view, both girls and boys are equal so they should go for co-education and inequality between them also demolished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96174863388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46223226268 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445355191257 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9656385506 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384886135813 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144856157508 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135852178037 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289325051281 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147932362716 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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