Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations, others, however think that tv and internet is best way to learn discuss both views and give your opinion
A few people reckon that visiting another country is an important part to know new things and on the other hand others think that since there is internet and Tv they can learn new things without visiting abroad. I feel that it is an integral part of our lives to go to another country to experience new things.
At the moment with the globalization people tend to travel other countries to learn about those countries and experience new things. People can experience so many things if they travel other countries. People can learn about new cultures; they might find new friends and eventually it will be a blissful moment of their life. Even more, most importantly people can make memories. In addition to that, when people travel another country they can actually feel that exact moment and it will lead them to have a proper knowledge about that country.
On the contrary, people can use the technology to gain knowledge about other countries unless visiting there countries. But the information in the internet and Tv might be Wrong so people won’t get a proper knowledge via technology. Furthermore, they cannot get the exact experience by learning from the internet and Tv because I believe that we can gain knowledge by actually experiencing it. The only advantage by using internet or Tv is people won’t spend lot of money and they can find information easily.
To sum up, I am convinced that despite using internet or Tv it is better if people go abroad to learn about these countries. At the end, they won’t regret about their decision it they had a great experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: proper knowledge
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, so, i feel, in addition, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82051282051 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58418612966 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465201465201 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2667143435 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239591164572 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994940926114 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611062405495 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157774694563 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159052599992 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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