These days ,people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life ,what are advantages and disadvantages of this ?
Currently, individuals excercise many kind of professions, and during theirs career most of them switch to other job. This is certainly makes theirs career path adventurous, however, there are also some significants downsides to this practice.
First of all, changing jobs can be positive, if you get the opportunity to gain experience and skills, for example, for those who are working in IT, the new environment will help them to learn new programs which current company do not provide. Gaining new skills will make you valuable employee, moreover, will help to open doors for new jobs opportunities. Secondly, switching to other job can be a great chance to advance in your career and earn a good pay. Some people are struggling to get new promotion in their current job, so, changing companies might be a solution to move forward in your career path.
In other hand, the negatives of changing jobs, firstly, the employer might hesitate before hiring you, because, he won't hire an employee who will work for one, or two years then he will left the company. Also, employers are looking for employees who will build theirs career with the same organisation. Secondly, recruiters might be worry about your judgement and personality,
because, those are changing a lot theirs job have reputation for being volatile, and flighty. For example, studies show that 35% of person in America have lack to find a new job, because, they changed several time theirs career path.
To sum up, changing jobs have a positive and negative sides, however, individuals should know how the build theirs career without failing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64293705788 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9300516947 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209105464495 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935290463694 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410761991958 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140568605519 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286623031347 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.