Each year the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
The growing level of criminal activities have proven to be a major issue in the 21-century. Consequences of crime growth come as a both progression in developing insufficent condition and parents have not liability to childrens. In this essay, I will analyse the cause and privades solution.
First of all, different categories of crimes have increased such as stealing,much more serious crime for instance,murdering someone. Firstly,this kind of crimes can lead to commit by creating revenge.Unfortuently, it is really difficult to coherent criminals before the humans happen a range of crimes.To address this issue,people might have an enough money to perform requirements. This is a exemplified by the 60 percentage of people might not have to the ability to achieve temporary job and need to earn competitive salary to look after their childrens. In order to solve this issue, if state goverment would emphasis unemployed humans, a variety of crime activities will reduce signaficantly.
On the one hand, parents and teachers should private good role modelling in their own behaviour. I strongly believe that, responsibility plays a important pormanent role in parents and a knowledge of the teachers. For instance, Majority of teachers have to educate though organizing and talking about a main factors of avoiding a lot of serious crimes. Also, adolecents must comprehend to avoid bad situations by this kind of presentations.
I conclusion, I think, growing a number of unemployed humans and a negligible parents reasons for cause of rising crime events. I order to eliminate this problem, government should develop solutions to prevent this rise in criminal activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43129770992 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32470792237 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5739860982 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230245576893 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765135589773 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573341708232 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142437853314 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775068351173 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.