An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend In your letter
• say how you feel about the visit
• suggest what you could do on his/her birthday
• try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea
Dear Sarah,
It was a delightful surprise to hear from you after such a long time. My joy knew no bounds when I read that you are coming to visit me on your birthday. Special arrangements are made for your 25th birthday celebration.
I have made the booking outstation in Lonavala for your birthday. It's a four bhk bungalow mids of the mountain, along with the pool, with a beautiful veranda. We have planned for outdoor cooking, as you are very fond of Indian spices and cooking culture. The theme for the party is Hawaiian; once you land in India, we can go shopping. There are also drinking games arranged specially for you.
I will be pleased to know if there are any changes you expect for the party arranged. If there is anything, you want to add to make it more memorable your 25th birthday, please let me know.
I am waiting eagerly for you.
Yours lovingly,
Shreyas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...tstation in Lonavala for your birthday. Its a four bhk bungalow mids of the mountai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55974842767 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44900524217 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691823899371 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8374122384 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.4166666667 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252688571151 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988948965871 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550314495628 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161831164701 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500991253966 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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