In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
In plenty of countries, owning a home rather than renting one is the significant for people.
Why might this be the case?
Now, a lot of country want to be owning a home. Because of it is important situation and homeless people probably live unique and unconvinient in their lives. Also, there are several disadvantage and advantage this condition. I think that every people should obtain own home all times.
Why do you have a yourselves home?
The positives, home is the important place, when people were born, he or she has been living, growing and educating more information about world. In my view, i understand that owning a home more and more good than renting. If people stay the renting maybe they fall that not convinient and not invite different guest. On the other hand, some people love to go to the journey while their fully life and they do not need owning a home because of they do not live one place and leave to the other country step by step. For example, you can see that journalists' and interpreters' work related to travelling and they go to journey and the world.
The negatives, in the world, more and more people are living a rent this is why they have not home and probably they are necesserily lived one and they called homeless people or poor ones.
In conclude, in a sense, all time, people try to be owning a home and to home and family gives different happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...he case? Now, a lot of country want to be owning a home. Because of it is important situ...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several disadvantages'.
Suggestion: several disadvantages
...vinient in their lives. Also, there are several disadvantage and advantage this condition. I think t...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'yourselves'?
Suggestion: a; yourselves
...in own home all times. Why do you have a yourselves home? The positives, home is the impor...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re information about world. In my view, i understand that owning a home more and ...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...life and they do not need owning a home because of they do not live one place and leave to the ...
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Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e world, more and more people are living a rent this is why they have not home an...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...de, in a sense, all time, people try to be owning a home and to home and family gives dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5577689243 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42720725489 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529880478088 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7428490991 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405059134111 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133367884819 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105624639568 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189065695611 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134286053923 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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