Some people believe that having access to the internet is necessary to live a full life today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that nowadays access to the internet is a critical factor to have the best life. In my opinion, availability of the online resources is crucial despite some drawbacks.
Opponents justify their view by the lack of interpersonal communication among people, which is not possible through the internet. Having in person contact is considered vital for many people to build strong relationship with each other. Unfortunately, this contact is hardly can be build via online resources. Many scientists have proven that advent of the technological innovations have created communicational issues as people started to communicate less. Thus, such lack of in person contact which is not possible via online, is an issue for many people.
Nonetheless, the internet have opened many opportunities, too, one of which is it helps people to accomplish most of their tasks without going outside. Many adults spend most of their time at work and have less time for daily activities such as shopping, education. The internet made it possible to accomplish such tasks without spending their after-work time. Consequently, they can save this time for more valuable staff or their family member. In addition, online sites and social media give access to the first hand news. People now who live in New York can easily get instant news about happening in Baku. This lead to the fact that people do not have to fly long distances, but can get information whenever they are.
In conclusion, although accessibility of the internet may create issues with the in-person communication, it also created opportunities such as doing daily tasks online and getting first-hand news from online sources.
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| 2021-01-15 | localdesignmart | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25092250923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90592221631 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3444019837 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17614030435 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633820134476 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622281255491 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119311958307 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548548872558 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.