Some people think that it is a good idea of all employees to wear a uniform at work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are people who advocate for wearing uniforms to work. While, such rule can be beneficial for companies, however, I disagree that it have positive effects on employees.
Proponents believe that uniforms can be used to create good image in the society. By wearing company’s distinct attire, employees can popularize company, especially those who are not so popular in the society.
Nonetheless, application of strict rules such as wearing form to work is not beneficial for employees. Many people use clothing to express themselves. Wearing the same uniform every single day may discourage people as they may feel losing of their identity. Consequently, it can have pernicious effects on the done work and encourage people to look for work in other companies with less strict rules. In addition, uniforms may not be comfortable to everybody. People have different body structures and size. If uniforms fit one person, it may not necessary be fitted or comfortable for other. Thus, wearing uncomfortable clothing every day also have negative effects on job progress.
In conclusion, although, companies may benefit from uniforms as a mean of advertisement, employees, however, can get discouraged if these uniforms will force them to loose their identity and will be uncomfortable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ed if these uniforms will force them to loose their identity and will be uncomfortabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43564356436 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00192729649 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608910891089 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1137582693 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179910717116 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741711182098 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502669740344 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109719637833 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405904857879 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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