Dear Mr. Sagar,
I am writing this letter to inform you that am unable to pursue my ongoing evening course until end of this year. As you are aware, that I am working full time in a bank and nowadays due to excessive work pressure, am reaching home extremely late. Due to this reason, I have decided to discontinue my part time course for a while.
To be honest, my colleague has been admitted to IMH health centre for past two weeks and she has been diagnosed with depression problems. Therefore, she needs to stay warded for sometime to recuperate from her mental illness. My team and myself have visited her few times already and there seems to be no signs of early discharge. Thus, my boss has requested me to take over her responsibilities for few months till she recovers and joins back. Moreover, this extra workload is quite challenging and requires a lot of time and patience.
I hope you can understand my dilemma and excuse me for this year. Also, I definitely wish to continue and complete my course the next year in 2022. Please do share your schedule for the same and provide me with relevant dates and timings if applicable in advance.
Looking forward for your swift response.
Yours sincerely,
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ar. As you are aware, that I am working full time in a bank and nowadays due to excessive...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...owadays due to excessive work pressure, am reaching home extremely late. Due to th...
^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...eason, I have decided to discontinue my part time course for a while. To be honest, my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73732718894 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54336134957 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658986175115 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.032528347 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257852794461 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870061070758 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677511392539 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145618008559 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101388787148 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.