Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Now a days , devoting a considerable time to video and virtual games is so common among all generations globally, meanwhile some parents have a great feel of responsibility on whether this type of games are affecting their child's training curriculums and daily school programs, which can be viewed as a true concern. In this essay I am going to put into words why this issue can be critical and even alarming for students education.
To begin with, using of online computer and video games has increased drastically these days due to their easy availability, also wide spreading and popularity world wide. Young adults and teenagers every where, as their huge users share the games online and in other word its becoming a modern concern and criteria among new generation in particular.
On the other side of this issue, worried parents who have accompanied and monitored their children in different challenges during their educational journey and aiming big for them, are encountering this phenomena which in their point of view is strongly harmful to the routine daily programs of school and studying. Spending extra time for these type of games can defiantly harm the one's mindset and consequently, focusing on what should be the major target during teen ages and young adults, namely maintaining the high school and college field of study or generating ones special talents and bring it to surface would be ignored and weakened, because the student him or her self can not concentrate cautiously on the main goals which is obviously effective on his future career. Therefore it is efficiently needed by both parents and mentoring system to keep the focus on targeting correctly and lower the spent time on gaming online.
In conclusion, although the inner enthusiasm of youths and students is tended more to devote almost all their time for computer games, but generally parents are opposed to this idea and are aware of its negative impacts on their children's future. There is of course a big deal for them to set a balance between the sufficient time for learning and devoted time on gaming. Since the students may not be able to prioritize their programs and demanding, Adults have to orient their upcoming path correctly and accompany them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in particular, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02673796791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64672544015 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601604278075 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.833879264 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.0 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223786978612 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873967586448 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426635968054 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132127782673 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044749561255 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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