Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?
People perform various activities when they have free time. However, youth has adopted shopping as their favourite hobby. I believe that they should spend their leisure time in more productive activities, including joining the sports centre, or tourism, in order to keep themselves fit and healthy.
Most of the teenagers would prefer to visit the shopping malls, especially on the weekends. They offer trendy and fashionable clothes to the public. Youngsters who follow the latest fashion trends normally visit these plazas and do window shopping. For instance, according to the recent survey, the popularity of branded clothes is increasing among the young generation and the young generation wants to buy them even though they could not afford them. As a result, when they start earning, they spent a lot of budget on these items.
There are more productive ways of relaxing and spending quality time. Firstly, joining a gymnasium, or a sports club is a great option. Not only these activities keep us fit and active, but also offer us an opportunity to socialise with the like-minded people. Another useful way of spending leisure time is tourism. With the help of cheap air tickets, people can visit almost any region of the world. Having exposure to people from multiple cultures and backgrounds will broaden the horizon of teenagers. Thus, they will become more tolerant of others and will be in a better position to understand the perspective of the other persons.
To conclude, most of the young generation love to spend their free time buying their favourite items. After analyzing the situation, I would suggest that teenagers should opt for better hobbies, including travelling and exercise so that they can keep themselves active and knowledgeable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, thus, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21403508772 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6281708926 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7551025763 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4117647059 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222578836815 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582421232041 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03531018419 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123757083322 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210747028481 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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