In some countries foreign language is taught at primary school do advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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In some countries foreign language is taught at primary school do advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Growing the demand for multicultural attitude in students, many universities followed by renowned corporates are looking for talents with this kind of attitude, so to fill out this gap many nations have started to teach other countries languages to their pupils at a very early age.

In my opinion,I think that the benefits of learning foreign languages are enormous than the disadvantages it might bring to the students.

Admittedly, there are numerous advantages of learning a foreign language. First of all, students can easily communicate and understand the language of other people while pursuing their masters from international universities, as well as it would benefit them in their jobs to communicate with their colleagues. Moreover, learning a second foreign language is itself a great achievement, and students can show these skills on their CVs to impress employers and NGOs to secure their internships.

Nevertheless, there are some disadvantages of learning the language, some students may decrease their focus on other important subjects just to get a better score. Secondly, there is very little chance that the language would be useful to them because not every student would join the University or work in an environment where the people would be diversified. Instead, some will work or settle in their on the nation
And so not each student will get benefits of learning the other language.

To conclude, instead of teaching a foreign language to students at an early age, the government should initiate teaching these subjects in the higher secondary, Where students may have decision power about their further education and so only those could take the subject who is planning for abroad studies. Otherwise, students can take it if they want to learn this type of subject just for their personal development.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, kind of, as well as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30716723549 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85737082308 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9193908603 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.5 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141880271506 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068033778923 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452396721829 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751206741091 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422039367648 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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