Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In today's time where dangerous sports are gaining more popularity, there are people who believe that these kind of sports should not be available. In my opinion, such sports are unhealthy and not worthy of risking life. This essay will highlight why I think that such games should be banned.
To begin with, sky diving, skiing,etc. are the life threatening sports where participants may lose their lives if proper safety measures are not in place. Another reason for demanding the ban is lack of certified professional and unawareness among participants. For example, there are many places in the world which offer sky diving, but only few of them are govenment approved and recommended. Also, in the begining of such sports the person who participate has to sign a consent form. Even if any jeopardise situation occur in the even, his relatives cannot question the authority or make any legal charge.
On the other hand, there are people who demand that such sports should be available because they are thrilling and they want to experience the worth of life. They also argue that life should be full of unique experiences and putting life in danger gives them adrenaline rush which cannot be experienced otherwise. As an instance, there are many reality shows broadcasted on TV and internet, where participants talk about there fears, experiences which inspire others to participate in such sports. Moreover, people claim that such sports help them to overcome their fear.
Conclusively, I assert that the dangerous sports like sky diving and skiing involves risk of life and has to be prohibited by government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...re many places in the world which offer sky diving, but only few of them are govenment app...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...I assert that the dangerous sports like sky diving and skiing involves risk of life and ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1015037594 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67834123797 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5338269004 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247218573336 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866253576666 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591484516956 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167682711053 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563160705582 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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