You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend,
asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need
saying why you need them
making arrangements to meet
Dear Prince,
I am so glad that you are coming next week, as is seems ages when see each other. I hope you and your family are doing well. I have a favor to ask you and I hope you don’t mind. Actually, I need some valuables things from my home. Is would be great if you bring them along in your suitcase.
let me explains the things why I need them. Firstly, I accidently left my laptop at my home country. It has my all crucial documents and pictures, and also laptops in my current locations are overly expensive. Secondly, I need my Engineering books too, because in my current course, I am studying something similar to what I studied before and also in those books, topics are explained briefly and language used for explanation is very simple too.
I hope that would be manageable for you to carry my stuff with you. It would be a great help for me. I would come to take you from the airport, and I would be wearing black pent and a red jacket.
looking forward to seeing you next Wednesday
Lots of love,
Manish
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ope you and your family are doing well. I have a favor to ask you and I hope you ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...u bring them along in your suitcase. let me explains the things why I need them....
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...wearing black pent and a red jacket. looking forward to seeing you next Wednesday ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39896373057 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34523363625 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9159883516 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3076923077 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29824283331 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122494164681 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077667964859 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184498927228 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121903728659 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ope you and your family are doing well. I have a favor to ask you and I hope you ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...u bring them along in your suitcase. let me explains the things why I need them....
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...wearing black pent and a red jacket. looking forward to seeing you next Wednesday ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39896373057 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34523363625 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9159883516 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3076923077 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29824283331 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122494164681 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077667964859 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184498927228 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121903728659 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.