Nowadays some older people choose to live in retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development？
With of advent of advanced technologies social liberation and fast-paced lifestyle, family structures have changed considerably to the environment they live in. Instead of residing with their young kids, senior citizen opts to live in a retirement centre. It is a positive development as it reduces loneliness which is common in old age and help in improving health issues as well.
To begin with, it is beneficial in many ways for citizens. Firstly, the loneliness that is one of the biggest difficulties of old age is automatically solved by retirement homes as people get to live with others of their generation and can socialize with other people can share their feeling, they have a common interest and many more. For instance, some people at this age never relate 21st-century topic discussion in many families, at the time of family gathering. They were felt more please and comfortable in bygone nostalgia and could very well mingle among people of their generation. Such a company of people being easily available in retirement homes helps their mental health to be a very good shape. Another merit is elderly people every time need specialised care and it would be only possible if they have good medical service. Retirement sector is equipped with professional to prove the need for their clientele. However these days adults do not have time to spend with them. To illustrate, in many families daughter and son both are working so they do not get enough time to look after their old parents due to their hectic schedule. Hence, the retirement community become better care of well being because they provide 24-hour medical care.
Finally, why older people need to reside in a retirement home because sometimes other members of the family do not behave properly with aged people. As the people age grown up their mental ability start get worsen but rather than accept this reality family behave rudely with them, as a result, they feel detachable and in this case, when they live in old folk's home, they get unwind atmosphere surrounded by their age generation people and also get independent life. As some sector provide small scale job in that sector only, for example, making a meal, making envelops, boxes so on through which they earn a small amount and live happily.
In conclusion, it is a great development for a senior citizen to stay at sheltered home because it not only provides basic necessity and medical help but also they can engage in various activity and with people by which they get happy and self-reliant life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98812351544 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60928068609 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520190023753 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0849529048 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324474097905 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10024878374 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733509773906 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199036636434 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641528128598 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.