Essay topics
Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand To what extent do you agree or disagree
The term of global warming is a genuien concern of humnan being causing by the ultilization of traditional energy such as fossil fuel, oil ,....In recent decades, human have a crucial invention in energetics known as nuclear power.And this resource is potentialy willing to replace traditional energy.In my opinion, i agree with the given statement.
In a side, nuclear power exert a significant innovation to mankind. Primarily, it resolves the environment problem .In particular, distinguished to conventional resource, nuclear factory do not generate cacbon dioxide which cause global warming. one of the strength of nuclear power regard to efficience.Due to the uniformity structure of nuclear atom, the mass of energy generation outperform any kind of presented resource.For instace ,with a few quantity of nuclear object, it can able to supply electricty for a whole city.
In the other hand, nuclear power contains some vitally hazards . One of the specific evidence is the castatrophe in Russia known as Chenobyl. The disaster stems from the expoision of the nuclear plant which vitally effect to Russia. In detail , the motality from that incident peak to hunred thousands people and demolish life condition in range of 20km radius by the exploision and radioative waves. In addition , some big countries take advantage on its stunning demolishment for establishing nuclear weapon .
IN BRIEF , nuclear power have a fundamental position in the bettermnet of humman being although it still contain a burden of risk threating to the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, in addition, in brief, in particular, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40663900415 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00727575212 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659751037344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.8066076891 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141801833058 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505593130672 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037084448502 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752632928754 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413464447028 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.