Some people think that wild animal should not be kept in zoos Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Change is the one of the component of society and one should accept it. Today there are two opinions about zoo life. Some people says that, animals must be live in the forest as it is there home. While others say that zoos are essential part of society. In my view animals must be stay in their original place like in the trees, farms, sea, mountain where they have comfortable life.
There are some advantages of zoos, like children can see animals, they not only can see them but also can observe. Some small animals like rabbits, quala, birds like ostrich, flamingos can be saved. Many of the times people do not afford forest safari trips, so they can visit to this artificial home of wild animals.
Now days, this wild life is take care under proper observation of well-trained experts. They pay proper attention towards them. Many animal tribes are vanishing due smuggling or hunting, so zoos are the place where they can be saved. If we take an example of zoos in USA then, I confidently say they are really taking good care of this forests animal as they have large area for roaming as well as have been covered with trees. For visitor’s particular place is built from where they can view animals.
On the other side if we think about disadvantages of zoos, then real place for animals is jungle where they can live happily with their tribes. They may lose their mental ability as the animals like tiger, lion, leopard like to hunt by themselves. Whereas here in the zoo get their food without any trouble, they might forget their real way of living. Zoos expenses are managed by government and social organizations, if they will get low budget this directly effects on the living of animals.
Thus I personally feel if we want to balance nature and save animals then they have to stay in forests as it is their original place of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...live in the forest as it is there home. While others say that zoos are essential part...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to forest'
Suggestion: to forest
... Many of the times people do not afford forest safari trips, so they can visit to this...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tly effects on the living of animals. Thus I personally feel if we want to balance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61212121212 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26163759063 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3756610109 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207256104988 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730147823267 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044607037802 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119779303634 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065077625474 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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