Humans are the most intelligent species inhabiting the planet earth, after thousand's of years of human civilization, technological breakthrough has left our planet more vulnerable than ever before. To heal the damage caused, some believe it is of the at most importance that we face this pandemic together as one, thereby, the relationship between the different countries has to play a major role in overcoming this global epidemic. I agree with this notion, the below essay will explain my point of view with some relevant examples.
To embark on, the major global problem we are all facing in the 21st century is the overall raise in the earths surface temperature, more commonly known as global warming. This is due to the depletion of ozone layer protecting the earth from harmful uv radiations coming from the sun. Furthermore, humans are solely responsible for global warming, as they have abused the use of chlorofluorocarbon (CFC) in every single air cooling system for more than a decade. For instance refrigerator's back in the day used CFC as it is more cheaper and reliable, however, after knowing the side effects of CFC there was a global ban proposed by the world health organization (WHO) to which every country abide. contributing to the over all reduction in breakdown of O3 within the ozone layer.
On the other hand, the covid19 pandemic has illuminated the importance of international relationships, the trade of essential medications that have proven to be life saving, thereby, many who previously did not give much importance to international relationships have considered this to be a strong point in the coming future, For example, India had exported 'hydroxycholoroquine' to the 'United States Of America'. Moreover this alliance has contributed to reduce the number of casualty's due to the global pandemic of covid19.
To conclude, international relationship's are more important than ever before. In my belief there is no harm in admitting help for the betterment of our people and planet.
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum Nowadays information is freely available on internet therefore is no longer need for museum To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 61
- The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 77
- Research says more and more business training and business meeting taking place online Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...ators back in the day used CFC as it is more cheaper and reliable, however, after knowing th...
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Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Contributing
...ation WHO to which every country abide. contributing to the over all reduction in breakdown ...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...oquine to the United States Of America. Moreover this alliance has contributed to reduce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20183486239 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09783366681 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590214067278 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7985415038 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.75 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191543924114 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670777952378 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664307047343 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119251376153 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522970806422 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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