Globalization has opened up opportunity to both developed and under-developed countries, this idea was always contentious by the masses, some believe this to be a negative development, others think this to be a positive out come, I stand with the second statement, the below essay will discuss both the positives and negatives of globalization.
TO begin with, although, underdeveloped countries are booming with talent, they are not able to harness this potential, due to obvious reasons. However, this has not gone unnoticed, as many of the multinational companies invest to tap into this market. For instance, IBM a renowned tech company, they invested millions into Indian market back in 90's, in addition to, the vast investment in infrastructure, it required man power which was fulfilled by the country, Furthermore, this boosted the counties economy as they had to abide by the tax charges, additionally, this opened up a an entire new market that the company could benefit from, thereby, this benefits both the company and the country.
On the flip side, globalization has forged a path that many have followed, the number of multinational companies in India has increased drastically. This has many negative consequences, pollution of many river bodies could be contributed to globalization. For example, an articular in "Times of India" illustrated that Ganga river is one of the most polluted river in the world, this could be contributed to the industrialization around the river banks. Furthermore, these industries are notorious to cause air pollution, they are known to disrespect their surroundings, thereby, up-scaling the damage caused to the nature.
To conclude, there are obvious draw back of globalization, however, i am of the belief that, the positives of globalization outweigh the obvious drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, second, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44755244755 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31396233005 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.828214388 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.111111111 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090485839621 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045457073077 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531848884885 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588500948517 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00885983213292 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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