The invention of an airplane is a major discovery of the third medium for locomotion, besides being an important invention it is also considered as a major milestone in humanity.Some believe that air traffic is a leading source of noise and air pollution, As every new invention has its own bane and boons i would like to account few of these.
To embark on, this latest mode of transport has made peoples lives effortless and locomotive , as they can save time and energy by voyaging in air. Human always prefer convenience over conservation, therefore the amount of people using air transportation has rapidly increased over the upcoming years which lead to the increase in the net air traffic.The airplane has a set of very powerful engines with heavy combustion of fuel which leads to substantial air and noise pollution. Bountiful folks plan their holiday destinations and vacations as there is an availability of air tickets at a reasonable rate, this can be a minor reason for the air traffic.
Increasing air traffic is very precarious to the environment, In addition to that construction of airports also cause air and noise for a limited period of time but also serve for a very long time when compared to the construction time.
Some believe that government should hike the taxes on the air tickets in order to reduce the air traffic, I do not agree with this notion as most of the people traveling by air do not seek leisure and have a official or locomotive reasons. The government will only burden the plain folks to take other means of transport which consumes time and besides time consumption it may also pollute more than air transportation.
- Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist To what extent do you agree 56
- In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries Some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- The continued rise in the world s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time What are the causes of this continued rise Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity 56
- Nowadays the way many people interacy with each other has changed because of technologh In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make Has this become a positive or negative development 61
- Animals are in danger of extinction Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...idered as a major milestone in humanity.Some believe that air traffic is a leading s...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ce of noise and air pollution, As every new invention has its own bane and boons i would like...
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Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ew invention has its own bane and boons i would like to account few of these. To...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... peoples lives effortless and locomotive , as they can save time and energy by voy...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... to the increase in the net air traffic.The airplane has a set of very powerful eng...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... also cause air and noise for a limited period of time but also serve for a very long time whe...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing by air do not seek leisure and have a official or locomotive reasons. The gov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85211267606 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87831813687 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4017092347 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.857142857 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5714285714 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37952531288 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174261600029 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670107830213 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218936694366 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650651508459 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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