many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
To what extent do you agree??
It is supposed that about lifestyle of famous personalities which is published by forum, have a adverse impact on minors. I disagree with the statement as sometimes coverage of such person can be fruitful for teens, although it has some negative results. I will shed light on my views in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, considering the merits which may be enjoy by the adolescents, first and foremost is many television shows host by well know celebrities which encourage people to do some social works and brush up poverty-stricken people's life. To elaborate this, famous program 'satya Mave Jayte' telecast on screen which is host by popular Bollywood actor Aamir khan, the show focuses on sensitive social issues prevalent in India such as female foeticide, child sexual abuse, rape, honour killings, domestic violence, untouchability, alcoholism, and the criminalization of politics. It aims to bring the great achievements of people which often go unnoticed in order to encourage the audience to achieve their goals no matter what comes in between. It also aims to empower citizens with information about their country, and urge them to take action and become a helping hand for others.
On the other side, in the present era, young generation are attracted by the wealthy lifestyle of famous personalities and they started to following them. They try to walk like them and talk like them and forget their moral values. Some advertisements presented by such a celebrities are very dangerous for children. For instance, in a coca cola commercial, dangerous stunts are performed by the actors to achieve a small coke bottle and teenagers are try to do same like them which may lead to serious injurie or may be death. In addition to it, public figure person's drug addition habit give a bad impact on children because they follow them and think that it looks good in public.
To conclude it, adolescents should adopt good habits of such a famous people and following them instead of try their unsafe stunts and drug habits and media also try to telecast beneficial thing on television so that the next generation will do social work and help needy ones.
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... the next generation will do social work and help needy ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03055555556 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78637419828 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0512529421 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.307692308 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119697192167 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390226662486 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398266754554 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675209695848 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136041621464 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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