In many developed countries, youngster's are much more financially stable than ever before. However, they are yet to be satisfied with their life, to become truly happy. The below essay will discuss the various issues that cause this phenomenon.
There are myriad reasons for young generation to feel a sense of deprived happiness. Firstly, although they have sufficient financial stability, they have yet to feel the sense of accomplishment. For instance, if a student doesn't feel satisfied with his performance in academics, it is unlikely that he feels a sense of accomplishment. Secondly, in the contemporary society internet is imperative, people use internet in their day to day life. Furthermore, internet has altered the way we interact with each other. More and more people choose to interact with one and other online, rather than meeting in person like we should. Consequently, people in modern world are more susceptible to loneliness, thereby, depression and other psychological disorders are more likely to hamper once happiness.
On the flip side, we could take certain steps to mitigate the problem in hand. Youth could be more encourage to make physical interaction, make friends outside of their social media life. Studies show that if young people have more friends to talk too, they lower the risk of psychological disorders. Moreover, having more friends could yield long term benefits. For instance, they can learn how to socialise, interact with others as they become professionals.
Additionally, youth should be encouraged by their guardians about their life choices. For instance, if someone is more inclined to get better results in sports than academics, they should be encouraged to do so. Forcing them to do better in academics would stress them out, hampering their athletic achievements.
Conclusively, mental, psychological peace is the most important factor, contributing to true happiness.
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- Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist To what extent do you agree 56
- A country should spend money on skills training or vocational training for practical work rather than on university education To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Research says more and more business training and business meeting taking place online Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83063400829 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 300.0 20.2975951904 1478% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1594.0 106.682146367 1494% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 300.0 20.7667163134 1445% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156682810534 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156682810534 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871861191281 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448587013558 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 153.6 13.0946893788 1173% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -241.48 50.2224549098 -481% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.5 11.3001002004 1075% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.0 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.31 8.58950901804 260% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.0 10.1190380762 1206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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