Some people think that government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others say that it is the responsibility of the individuiuals to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opnion.
Some people opine that individuals have the onus to keep themselves protected from criminal activities wheras others believe that government should take measures to control crime. According to my opinion, legislation is more responsible since it has authority to put law and orderd in reinforcement to prevent crime whereas if indiviuals take precautions at their end then crim rate can aslo be reduced.
The government is considered liable for prevention of crime because it has the fundamental duty to provide peaceful environment to public. It passes laws which ensures safety of public and anyone who disobeys law is given severe punishment and hence create sense of fear among offenders. Moreover, people have faith in judicial system of its nation. If any mishappening occurs, they knock at door of court to seek justice as they contemplate that they will be tretaed fair in court by providing justice.
Furthermore, the individuals can also take preventive measure to safeguard them from crime because the government cannot control what a person does at indiviual level. A person is more aware what is good or bad for him. For example, if a person gets involved in illegal activities such as drugs, gambling and rash car driving, authorities cannot control what a person does on diurnal basis. Also, some cases have been observed of child abduction, in those scenarios, parents can make sure their under- aged child is not going outside alone and arrange a convenient mode of pick up from school.
To sum up what have discussed so far, no doubt that governmrnt has more effective ways to prevent any criminal activity in locality but with the collaboration of people, the society can be made a better and safe place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, for example, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96864111498 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68171835764 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 287.0 20.2975951904 1414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1426.0 106.682146367 1337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 287.0 20.7667163134 1382% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187772023537 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187772023537 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111597852334 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675515111361 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 145.5 13.0946893788 1111% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -219.83 50.2224549098 -438% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 115.2 11.3001002004 1019% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.03 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.89 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 116.8 10.1190380762 1154% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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