You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.
Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter
• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting
Dear Neighbours,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. I am writing to express my concerns related to the ongoing issue of non-availability of parking for our cars in our society.
Let me explain the problem in this letter. As we have discussed earlier, that we will be parking our cars just adjacent to the front gate of our houses in a proper way, so that everyone will find convenient and enough space to park their cars. However, I am seeing for the past few days that most of the residents are not parking cars properly according to the discussion. Besides, I have seen that a few of our neighbors park cars at my parking without informing at my house. Due to such things, most of the locals face issues while parking cars in the neighborhood.
To avoid this problem, I would suggest that we should draw white borderlines on the parking area where each resident would able to park their car in the allotted same area as per the government. By creating parking lines in the each of houses, it will be easy for everyone to park cars properly in our area. I can arrange for two painters to do the task if you will all share your views and approval in the next colony meeting.
The next meeting will be going to take place on coming Sunday at 9 AM. I am looking for maximum participation and leads in the next colony meeting to discuss the parking problems and other issues in our neighborhood.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...djacent to the front gate of our houses in a proper way, so that everyone will find convenient ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54909090909 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5514215775 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.711617334 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248675364688 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854589103094 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561355274592 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124349039829 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734877901408 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.