Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? all university student should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is
It is crystal clear that the educational systems in diffrent countries have tried to highlight their own history for students. Many people hold the opinion that all students in universities should take courses in history, despite of their different majors. I, personally speaking, agree with this opinion. the reasons to substantiate my view are elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the history couses will improve the sense sensponsibilty in students who study in different majors. The student can study about the occurences in the past, and learn about the people who put their families and dreams aside to improve their country. Moreover, the sudents can learn about the wars, and the people who started them. Therefore, they can understand the value of humanity. For instance, I had history courses during my undergraduate program. Before I take the course, I tried to cheat in my other courses, and my projects. When I took the history course, I study about a famous man, named Dr Mosadegh. He was a very famous man because Although he lost his son, he fought against England to Improve Iranian industry. The people have recognized him as a legend in my country. After I stuied about him, I understood that my country build on such a class of thpught. As a result, I changed and tried to be a real human. from that day, I have never cheated on anybody, and helped the people around me.
Secondly, learning about different aspect of life and people's decisions during centuries in history courses can open different students minds. The students can study possible mistakes of previous poeple, and learn to avoid such a mistakes in simmilar situations. Moreover, These correct and incorrect decisions are somehow a bank of brainstorming. The students may consider consequence of each decisions and decide what to do in similar dilemmas. My own experience clearly demostrates this concepts. When I was at unversity, I studied about industrial revolutions, and how the decrease and then increase in workers' sallary can affect and improve the whole workers' mind, and consequency companies' efficiency. Five years later, I hired in a company as a chief engineer. Once there was a dilemma in which my boss did not want to increase the wages. I spoke with him about historical concepts of industrial revolution, and he agreed to decrease the sallaries at first and the increase them. fortunately, the company efficiency increased, sales became double and company financial position inproved.
To conclude, considering mentioned reasons into account, I strongly agree that all the students in the university should take history courses. This is because history courses improve the sense of responsibility among students, and also studying history leads to open-minded students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17880794702 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83644788488 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534216335541 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6436534207 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7857142857 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1785714286 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96428571429 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232983247597 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565916871518 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663138211551 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171291634978 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668766196429 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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