More and more students choose to go to another country for higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problem?
Education is the utmost need of every individual. Multitude number of students nowadays are opting to acquire higher degrees from abroad countries. This essay shall discuss why study abroad has become a first option for students followed by its pros and cons.
There are two main reasons of studying abroad. First is exposure and second is advancement in technology. Let us elaborate and reason it further. The first reason of exposure is of great importance, when you study in other than your own country you are exposed to a new environment, different types of people with different values and culture. Therefore, learning more. For instance, a very renowned medical college in my country is Aga Khan University; which encourage students in their final year to visit and perform their internship in prestigious clinic of USA that namely Mayo Clinic. Because, they believe by exposure they will learn and excel more. The second benefit is of advancement in technology, which helps students in learning in an up-to-date environment. Countries like USA, Australia and China has made so much improvements in information technology that anyone getting their education from such countries are benefiting themselves in every way possible. For instance, anatomy is studied in Pakistan on a corpse, which is wrong on moral grounds but in other countries they have simulated body systems upon which they can perform their studies.
On the other hand, the only problem which is seen in studying in another country is homesickness. When you move to study in a different place mostly you are in a very vulnerable age. Most of the times children are so dependent on their parents that they face problem in almost every task, whether it is cooking, cleaning or doing laundry. Such factors pressurize them and hence making them homesick.
Over all, the above mentioned benefits definitely overshadow its problems. Homesickness is a temporary factor which can be overcome easily by learning tricks of the trade. But benefit of studying in a much upgraded class accompanied by exposure to different people and culture is definitely cherry on the top.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 824, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ke USA, Australia and China has made so much improvements in information technology ...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing in another country is homesickness. When you move to study in a different place ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16714697406 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74717323359 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4694701559 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.65 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218522648848 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057041500971 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429901733456 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111138000402 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456122492643 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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