Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others,however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer
Well,health is one of the great concern in these days; majority of people thinks,it is quite difficult for people a difficult task to perfom in this modern world. However,other fell that it is very simple for individual to stay fit and fine,if they want to do be. In my prospective, i found latter viewpoint more relevant.
To start with, the former view point, nowadays people find difficult to stay in the shape due to the unhealthy lifestyle. Masses are following hectic schedule in order to earn more and more money; in the result they do not able to get enough time for excercise furthermore,they do not get time to look after there body and in this manner they lead an unhealthy life. Moreover,in this on going time people eat a lot of jung food because it become a culture or you can say that a trend which all follows cooking culture is almost vanished and this fast food contains lots of ingirident which is not good for health, consumption of these may lead to obesity. Thus, because of this type or modern life it is quite difficult for everyone to stay fit.
However, a part from upper statment, anyone can tackle with this problem.all he or she need is willpower and determination. To elaborate, a person can do walking or running in there leisure time to stay healthy. In addition,they can use bicycle when traveling to office . This will not only save there time but helps them to stay fit also. Moreover, they can cook there own food full with of nutrients that helps them to stay healthy. They can look after how much calories they are intakeing and calories they burn everyday with the help of internet and their smart phones.
In conclusion, there is no doubt, nowadays it is very difficult to have a good health because of people busy working time and there eating habits; however, if a person is dedicated towards his or her health they can easy achieve this target by taking walk and changing there eating habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66763848397 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5432956623 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3114889685 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222475691729 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757344907621 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732762823223 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151317351933 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967413701033 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.