A lot a places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problem if it is not managed correctly. describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world
Collecting funds using the tourist industry is a common trend these days. No one can deny the fact that if this is not tackled with planning, it will be generated a number of problems. While its demerits cannot be neglected, its merits will always outweighs the cones if the concerned issue will be addressed wisely.
It is fairly is easy to comprehend that why the globetrotting acknowledged as fruitful because it leads to economic growth and generate the employment. This is simply when tourists will explore any place, they would spend money to get provisions of residents, meal and health care services; consequently, this will help to rise government funds and ultimately they will be gradual incline in the economic rate. Additionally, the influx of visitors need more tour guides, hotel staff, chef and so on. Hence, for performing these vistas tasks more people are wanted and a large number of masses will get work. In short, enhancing touristy is tend to fulfillment of job seeker wish along with growing of country's economy.
Meanwhile, despite its betterment, there are certain downside like exploitation of natural resources and dimnishing of local culture. Firstly, due to the increasing trend of the tourism there are requirements of food, shelter and transport services; resultantly, forest and fuel resources are reducing at an alarming rate. Secondly, there are variety of masses present at tourist place from the whole world who have different culture. So individuals try to comfortable their guest by speaking their language and make efforts to understand their culture eventually native become adaptor to other customs. Thus, conservation of natural deposits and protection of indigenous Heritage are crisis due to globetrotting.
In conclusion, even though touristy has a few disadvantages, its pros exceed the downside and will act as work wonders if this industry organised properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'outweigh'
Suggestion: outweigh
...ot be neglected, its merits will always outweighs the cones if the concerned issue will b...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...vistas tasks more people are wanted and a large number of masses will get work. In short, enhanci...
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Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...t work. In short, enhancing touristy is tend to fulfillment of job seeker wish along...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'downsides'?
Suggestion: downsides
...spite its betterment, there are certain downside like exploitation of natural resources ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3300330033 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88643249621 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5456711803 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063674430279 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0183566877193 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026846211969 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0325770078218 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250855850598 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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