The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree
No one can deny the fact that government should alot their funding on prevention of health disorders rather than its cure. While the necessity of regime's concern about the treatment of diseases can not be neglected, I would argue that a stoppage of ailments is more precise step to deal with this.
On one hand, it is fairly easy to comprehend why government should preserve this for recovery health problems. This is simply because with the passage of time there is emergence of new diseases for which nobody, be it higher authorities or doctors, is prepared; consequently, reservation of some public money for the remedy purpose can act as a work wonder in tough time. For instance, during covid-19 pandemic when there is complete lockdown in the whole world, adminstration could handle the situation by these funds at a great extent. Thus, law maker should have to save some finance for unexpected health disastrous.
On the other hand, by keeping in mind the above view point, i opine that higher authorities give their regular concern in prohibition of health related problems. There is requirement of it because avoidance of sepreading of ailments prevent many to deal with the future financial crisis as well as suffering pain from the diseases. If a person comes in contact with the diseases, they will have to pay hefty amounts for treatment. Hence, higher authorities can tackle this problem in advance by providing vaccine and aware people through short videos and posters and update them about the various type of diseases and its consequences. For example, Indian administration plays a significant role for making their country polio free by doing aware their citizens about it's a disastrous result. In short, supreme authority plays a crucial role by spending money on stoppage of sepreading of diseases and make their country healthy.
To conclude, eventhough there are many cases which needs treatment, i assert that enhances the knowledge about stoppage of health problems and its implementation is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15407854985 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74517144553 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595166163142 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2108799808 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177020988774 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639152243879 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539493110398 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117544251832 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529022416758 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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