Number of enquiries to tourist information officer
The rendered polyline graph depicts how many investigations were made by various modes of communication to tourist information officer over the period of January 2001 to june 2001.
Overall, enquiries made by both in person and telephone went through a increasing trend while inquiries done by email/letter followed a declining trend. In person investigations were the least in first month of the year that reported the maximum investigations after six months.
With regard to face to face inquiries, this accounted for 400 in January and investigations made by the last month of first quarter of the year these observed as twofold as that of former one. After that, this went through flactuation and rose to 1200 investigations done by june. In case of inquiries conduct by telephone, initially, it comprised of 800 and then it fell slightly before reaching the same figure in march. From march to aprail it witnessed the plateau and then increased gradually.
In contrast, investigations conduct by email/letter varied cautiously, around 600 between January and march which experienced zigzag pattern for two months from 600 to 400. Then a decline was seen in this trend to 200 enquiries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: an
...th in person and telephone went through a increasing trend while inquiries done b...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to face'.
Suggestion: to face
...ations after six months. With regard to face to face inquiries, this accounted for 400 in Ja...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., investigations conduct by email/letter varied cautiously, around 600 between Ja...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, while, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0373113796 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.372352342 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0736321021608 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253922631554 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553521932473 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535010058499 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717121525046 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.