Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. why do you think this is a case? Is this a good thing or bad thing?
In this 21st Era, a lot of people, prefer trendy and voguish attires. I believe that this is a destructive development due to fake display of oneself in front of society and waste of money totally.
To commence with, people nowadays are affected by televisions and social media especially youngsters .They blindly follow their so-called ideals on internet. Likewise, young people also wants lifestyle of them in this case they were more likely to wear fashionable clothes like of celebrities. For instance, the trend followed by common people is exactly same that was used to by celebrities.Thus, teenagers want to put on designer clothing and they show off their fake ascent in front of society with the help of internet.
Moving towards, referring popular attires is affecting our youth rapidly, because these type of clothes are very much expensive and not affordable for middle class people. To elaborate it, the piece of cloth can give us a short time happiness but we have to spend much money for this small happiness. To epitome, many people bought dresses of worth lacks of rupees or more than that. In this much money they should help the others needy people rather than spending it on a much expensive and designer clothes.
To conclude, people who prefer fashionable clothes is their choice but it is vividly seen that, these are used to pretend in front of society and for wasting of money.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... televisions and social media especially youngsters .They blindly follow their so...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and social media especially youngsters .They blindly follow their so-called idea...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...nd social media especially youngsters .They blindly follow their so-called ideals o...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ly same that was used to by celebrities.Thus, teenagers want to put on designer clot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58039300827 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4682642856 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206686691171 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085542200215 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725107464911 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116099571527 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320887448419 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... televisions and social media especially youngsters .They blindly follow their so...
^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and social media especially youngsters .They blindly follow their so-called idea...
^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...nd social media especially youngsters .They blindly follow their so-called ideals o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ly same that was used to by celebrities.Thus, teenagers want to put on designer clot...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58039300827 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4682642856 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206686691171 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085542200215 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725107464911 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116099571527 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320887448419 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.