Cooperation is better than competition in school for students
Recent years have witnessed a hot debated issue whether being a cooperative or competitive person is encouraged in school life. Although it is assumed that cooperation is a better choice, I firmly believe that both of them has brought about multitude of bright sides for youngsters.
On the one hand, indispensable is that fact that partnership is major contributor to a student’s superior academic results. First and foremost, as the saying goes “Teamwork makes dream work”, working in a team not just enhances learning productivity but boosts efficiency when there are a great number of people devoting their ideas. As a result, student can curtail much time on each subject and develop their sense of responsibility to practice and perform outstandingly. Secondly, when collaborating with various members in a group, people can make mutual suggestions about others’ faults as well as learn the way to listen and analyze problems in different aspects. Therefore, having good negotiations do wonders for students to build up a solid based relationship and be assertive in making decisions to lead to group’ success. Without cooperation in school, students will lack of many practical skills to confront with daunting challenges during their lives.
Competition, on the other hand, is worthwhile especially for young students who are in the age of finding their own dream and affirming their position in school. Firstly, it is undoubted that rivalry creates great incentives with a view to stimulating children to move ahead and work around the clock to avoid the feeling of failure. Hence, being spirited will turn to be grand motivation to achieve their desire and future targets by their burn-the midnight-oil effort. Take myself as an example. I used to be an indolent person before determining to enter my dream school by learning hard to bear sweetish fruit. Secondly, in their age, children always want to show up their ability and qualification through contests with other competitors as a striking proof of their hardworking to receive people’s recognition. It, thus, will fortify student’s self-esteem and steel themselves to be an independent and spirit man living in a competitive market. Without competitiveness, youngster will not strive hard and live with an unoccupied attitude.
All in all, although cooperation seems to be an outstanding choice, I believe that the combination of both factors are greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34545454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04785024704 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625974025974 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7737266964 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.058823529 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212267717808 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633778968393 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659478614149 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135400562583 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803497320434 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.