Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In any country, Economic status and its growth are some of the factors for the development of its country. Some people suggest that governments should concentrate only on economic progress while others argue that there are other factors that need to concentrate as equally as economic progress. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and give my opinion on it.
To commence with, No doubt that if the economic graph of a country moves upwards, then that country will get a lot of opportunities than other countries. Increase in the growth of Economy of a country provided that there are more industries and good education. As well, the cost of the currency is also high in that country. Subsequently, People from other countries will get fascinated to go to that country to study and get jobs to settle there will help to boost the economy of that country furthermore. To exemplify this, The USA's Economic growth is very high and it is a developed country with a lot of multi-national companies and also attracts bachelor degree holders from all over the world to do graduate, and get a sound job in the USA. These are all the benefits that a country could get if its economic growth rose.
On the other side of the coin, Giving total priority is not at all a good choice by at least developing countries as they have a plethora of problems in other sectors too. Even though Economic status is essential to the developing countries too, there are other sectors that need growth like infrastructure, medical care, research, and education. Moreover, In these countries poverty is also a major problem. For an instance, In developing countries like India, Medical care and education services are hard to reach poor people. But, To improve the economic status the central government had increased the prices of petrol, cooking gas, and diesel which are basic needs in everyone life. Although there is economic growth with these kinds of actions, without improving the education and health services, the progression of a country is temporary.
In a nutshell, In developed countries focusing only the economic growth will not an issue but In developing countries, there are other factors that need to pay attention such as education, pharmacy along with the growth of the economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...her factors that need to concentrate as equally as economic progress. This essay will disc...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...arch, and education. Moreover, In these countries poverty is also a major problem. For an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, at least, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69163491236 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487113402062 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1362574898 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214097062149 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781998695359 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558910332938 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140318730489 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754818684843 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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