People believe that children commit crimes should be punished. Others think parents should be punished instead. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Some people believe that juvenile delinquents should be the ones who receive the punishment. Others, however, advocate that the parents should be given this instead. Personally, I believe that both of them should be disciplined to ensure that the children’s bad conduct will not be repeated.
On the one hand, juveniles are considered to take the responsibility for their crimes. Specifically, by punishing them, they would acknowledge that their misdemeanors are morally unacceptable and violating the law, which may do harm to humans and society. Also, as they experience the punishment themselves, they can learn that their delinquencies will result in the discipline that they must suffer from. In this way, we can make sure that they will not behave immorally in the future.
On the other hand, it is advocated that parents should be responsible for their children’s illicit demeanors. It is scientifically proven that parents can have a big impact on the children’s mindset during the nurturing process. Therefore, parents can reinforce kids’ misconceptions and make them expose to the tendency of performing unconscionable acts. By giving parents the punishment, they will stop indoctrinating their children with amoral beliefs about standard behaviors. All in all, this will reduce the chance of relapsing.
To conclude, despite controversial schools of thought on determining who should be punished, I endorse the hypothesis that both parents and children must be simultaneously in charge of the delinquencies to guarantee that the illegal activities will not be generated again. While parents are likely to be the indirect culprit behind this type of behavior, children are the real criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50378787879 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15497106188 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.267455962 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325902874404 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114550881184 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102543711274 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213034423853 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125107577976 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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