It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote area environment, such as South Pole. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
thanks to technological advances, modern people, including scientists and travelers, have been able to set foot on isolated areas like South Pole. there are both benefits and drawbacks that accompany this development, but I believe it to be an overall positive trend.
admittedly, travelling to far-flung places is troublesome or even dangerous to some extent. firstly, researchers and tourists alike are often exposed to harsh and unfavorable weather, which can adversely affect their health. for example, it is freezing cold in South Pole and visitors can easily encounter health problems if they are not sufficiently prepared. secondly, this form of travelling is rather costly as a great deal of investment is required for researching activities to ensure the safety of travelers. thus, only a limited number of scientists and affluent people can afford this luxury. in other words, this development seems to be beneficial only for a small group of people.
while the above disadvantages are reasonable, I believe that they pale in comparison with the accompanied benefits. for travelers, especially global trotters, having a chance to go to exotic and mysterious places like South Pole is a newer and understandably more exciting form of travelling. although it may expose them to dangers, those risks can be mitigated with careful preparation and simulation. also, despite its prohibitive cost, such a trip may leave tourists with exhilarating memories that can last for a lifetime. for scientists,they can take advantage of this chance to gain a deeper understanding of the flora and fauna at those remote places and in turn can implement better preservation plans to protect the wildlife there. this is indeed extremely necessary given the fact that global warming has become a serious issue worldwide and its negative impacts of those habitats are visible.
in conclusion, i reaffirm that travelling to remotely located natural areas provides scientists and tourists with more advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45222929936 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05792191622 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640127388535 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7963837645 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.133333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275148567343 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798929089331 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534506169199 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16748899201 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04039485485 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.