In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, University, or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some nations, an increasing number of adults have opted to live with their parents after their college graduation or even having embarked on their career. While there are gains to this trend, they are outweighed by the drawbacks, as will be demonstrated in the following essay.
Proponents of this trend highlight the benefit of better care and emotional support for both young members in the family and the elderly. This could be true in the event of sickness or the family or the loss of someone in the extended family. Also, at the beginning of one’s career, there may be a range of issues to sort out, including living expenses, suitable accommodation and social security. In cities such as Tokyo and New York City, as an example, the cost of renting a house or an apartment can be well above the salary of many jobs, resulting in people having to stay in their cars instead. For this reason, living with parents and sharing the bills seem a sensible temporary solution for young graduates while their professional life is gradually established for them to be financially independent.
However, there are pitfalls to this trend that need to be addressed. First and foremost, as different generations often have dissimilar lifestyles, living together can cause discomfort to all members. For instance, young workers may have to alternate shifts at work, leading to inconvenience that may disturb their parents’ schedule and habits. Similarly, young adults may lack a sense of privacy and personal time, as parents may accidentally trespass. To resolve this, young people can share rental fees with their flat mates to have a place of their own. In addition, in place of keeping daily interactions, visits to their parents on the weekend or each month can also be a viable alternative to maintaining family ties as less frequent get-togethers can also make each visit more special.
In brief, albeit advantageous in some aspects, there are more drawbacks to sharing living space with parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06927710843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73908150644 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8821586297 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245633935728 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811363987186 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828665003676 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181527271198 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837216817531 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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