Today, TV channels provide man’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows, why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport
Nowadays, social is developed more than in the past so the requirement about entertainment is higher. Many TV shows are manufactured to response it. But it still has some trouble when TV channels provide man's sport shows more than women's sport shows. It caused a quarrel when people make an effort to reduce the gender discrimination. Then, to solve it, should TV channels give equal time for women's sport and men's sport. This essay don't strongly agree or disagree with any opinion.
Why i don't steady intervention with any opinion? Because i think both opinion has true arguement. Nowadays, gender discrimination is fewer than in the past. Social is more developed, women are apperciated. They try to do everything which men can do or more than some men can. They have ambition and they are deserved in many sittuations, not just the housewife. So women can command the fundamental things to their life. It is easy to understand why they angry when something don't equal with women. And when women have the public approving, some girl may given a hand to follow their dream. Gender discrimination may be killed kids's ambition and we may lose some talented
But women still innately weaker than men, and men still dominate in sports. Many sports like : football, basketball,... still famous for men. And in some case, these sports more sensational ,dramatic and appealing when competitor are the men. Although it have women like and join in these sports, these are still attached to men. And man's sport shows certainly have more watcher than women's sports because women still prefer watching elegant things like cooking, knitting,... to sports. And producer can generate more profit from men's sports. So TV channels often have the priority to produce man's sport shows.
In conclusion, i think TV channels should confine men and women's sport show equality, don't have more quarrel about it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00317460317 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61177003841 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8727973454 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.20833333333 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.519103917102 0.244688304435 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142727782552 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175112642457 0.0667982634062 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373766217105 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165773023698 0.056905535591 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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