It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Do you agree or disagree?
Networking is a natural thing in our life as it happens in most of the cases automatically during our daily life. Therefore for me meeting new people is imperative in order to develop as a successful individual.
It is believed that human beings are tend to change as they grow up. In certain period of time old friends’ prefences or goals will not coincide and everyone goes to different directions following their aims. From my personal experience to be honest I had only one real friend and he is still my friend. We used to go out together like to the partys or to the special events. So we did not planned our weekend without discussing how to enjoy it. And at the moment we live in different countries and communicate rarely. As a normal and social person obviously I have to make new friends.
As far as I am concerned people have to stick to their goals not to the friends. Of course it does not mean that we should cut our relationships with old fellows completely but at the same time we do not have to strive to adjust our aims just to be together with them. During our life we study then we start and continue our professional experience in different locations and naturally we meet new people likely with some of them we share the same interests,goals so we begin to be in friendship. It is vital and natural process in society which plays crucial role for the growth of a person in every aspect of life.
To sum up I believe that making new friends is important for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...es automatically during our daily life. Therefore for me meeting new people is imperative...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... It is believed that human beings are tend to change as they grow up. In certain p...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d to change as they grow up. In certain period of time old friends’ prefences or goals will no...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'plan'
Suggestion: plan
...or to the special events. So we did not planned our weekend without discussing how to e...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bviously I have to make new friends. As far as I am concerned people have to st...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , goals
...some of them we share the same interests,goals so we begin to be in friendship. It is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, therefore, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47810218978 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66589539213 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4727096685 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129228500068 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506565694795 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751469155791 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115606333541 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993117317332 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.