Example Task 1
You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter,
Complain about the situation
Say why this is a problem
And propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am a third year student of an architecture college and my exams will be starting from next week. I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards a noise that is coming from nearby restaurant which is operating till late at night. They play loud music most of the time which is not allowed as per norms. But, there is no one to stop them so they keep playing the same for a long time.
This is really disturbing while studying. I am working very hard to do well for my exams but neither able to concentrate or sleep due to the continuous noise.
I, therefore would like to suggest that timing of the restaurant should be restricted to 10:00 pm. Also, if a notice is put up stating there is an educational premises nearby so keep the noise to an absolute minimum; it might be helpful.
Your valuable guidance will be helpful in this matter.
Kind Regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am a third year student of an architec...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e or sleep due to the continuous noise. I, therefore would like to suggest that ...
^^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'premise'?
Suggestion: premise
... put up stating there is an educational premises nearby so keep the noise to an absolute...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... helpful in this matter. Kind Regards, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44512195122 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42988378675 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707317073171 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9595944537 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111149564474 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389985537913 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774241860679 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530490114961 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585676029853 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.