Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However,others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is an issue of controversy over whether obtaining up-to-minute information through newspapers is of greater implication than through other media platforms. While many people think that newspapers contain more information, I subscribe to the opinion that people are able to learn the news better through other various sources of media.
On the one hand, It is understandable why some people argue that printed texts of news are of paramount importance in delivering news to people rather than other media. Firstly, newspapers are widely believed to be an official and reliable source of information as they are published by the government. As a result, people can avoid being exposed to misinformation stemming from various sources, raising the right understanding for citizens. In addition, whilst reading newspapers, readers can avoid unrelated pop-up advertisements and notifications which appear with increasing frequency via online news. Therefore, reading online news could bring users a sense of discomfort because of commercials, which would never happen if readers embrace traditional newspapers.
On the other hand, I would argue that other media could exert a greater number of benefits than newspapers. First, although the worries of media content are cited, this sort of news is still a reliable and diverse source of information. An explanation is that users who create bogus news might get administrative fines due to the law of media security. Hence, no one would publish fake news at the expense of their money. Furthermore, individuals who are unable to read both traditional and digital newspapers because of vision loss or impairment need media sources such as television with a news reporter delivering news articles for them. This would help those people keep updated with fresh information as normal people. Finally, thanks to the feature of switching to another language mode of digital newspapers, readers could grasp a chance of not only keeping abreast of information but also enhancing their foreign language competence through academic words used in newspapers.
In conclusion, despite the positive impact of newspapers, I hold a belief that other media exert greater implication on acquisition betterment of news to people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54515050167 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9864516612 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4365992297 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351452233133 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120108236609 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10517770387 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228390674007 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803826743359 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.