Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, whether history should be considered as one of the most paramount subjects in school or if science and technology could be viewed as being more essential have been called into question. From my perspective, I think the latter is more likely to be of much higher importance.
On the one hand, we cannot deny the magnitude of learning history to an individual’s development in terms of characteristics and skills. Comprehending about numerous adversities which ancestors overcame in the past in order to have a better life today such as many resistance movements to overthrow French and American governments, a lot of soldiers lost their lives to reclaim our sovereignty, etc helps students respect their life and be grateful to soldiers as well as instill great patriotism. Additionally, students can refine their reading and writing skills through both reading historical events from a wide array of time periods and analyzing information from multiple sources. For instance, after reading an article about the war between French and Vietnamese, students can write a paragraph indicating their feelings.
On the other hand, along with history, science and technology subjects are also fundamental in contemporary society. First of all, getting well exposed to these subjects does a favor for learners gaining a profound insight into major-related knowledge such as statistical data, scientific analyses. Therefore, they can easily apply this knowledge in reality to create innovative devices such as robots and practical research to improve their daily basics. Secondly, science and technology can alleviate and eradicate diseases to make life more convenient. For example, they can learn how medicines and treatments have been created and then they can find new vaccines to protect human’s life. Finally, technology subjects help them learn more about outer space beyond the Earth. Discovering the universe is becoming more and more easier by satellite and GPS. Personally, I think that with the usefulness of science and technology, we can create more modern devices to serve our lives and develop our country.
To sum up, both the subjects of history and science and technology have their own benefits for learners. Hence, it is necessary for students to learn and gain knowledge from those subjects.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 825, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ering the universe is becoming more and more easier by satellite and GPS. Personally, I thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38147138965 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88664289436 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588555858311 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5600427398 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4375 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192246780865 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682290950938 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667554671579 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129036334593 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058119429801 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 825, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ering the universe is becoming more and more easier by satellite and GPS. Personally, I thi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38147138965 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88664289436 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588555858311 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5600427398 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4375 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192246780865 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682290950938 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667554671579 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129036334593 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058119429801 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.